I like the original
This is still a solid track, good flow and all, but I really dig the other one. I think the chorus in the original was strong, catchy and well written. I'm not so keen on the changes you made to the chorus for this one.
"they say red means stop ... its your boy Grimcredible and Mackity Mack"
That section is damn good. Use it more!!
I do like the verses, you've improved the flow and meaning in a lot of places. Not too sure I like the changes in the beat though. The first one was simple and almost made me think of traffic lights. The strings in this one just don't seem to fit for me.
Yup. Still a good song, but I do like the first one a lot better.