Lather, Rinse, Repeat
Does it make me smarter? Makes me happy though :)
Lather, Rinse, Repeat
Does it make me smarter? Makes me happy though :)
Yesh yesh
Spittin fast words it's absurd,
Bobbin my head to this song like i was a bird,
Pigeon in fact, this can't be your first, musta been atleast your third,
That's my word.
MORE TRACKS LIKE THIS PLEASE!!
Im workin on it.
Yeah man!
Digging this! I kind of wish the stand up base was going crazy, like some Mingus finger picking. Sounds pretty chill though.
eeeeeaah xD
Sick!
Sounds good, I like the keys!
thanks for the inspiration!
YoYoYo
Hey-o,
I don't have time to record something new right now, but go look through my audio for one of my latest tracks called "Big Red - Mr Jones A Cappella". You could put that track over the beat! Interested? If you do, just credit "Big Red".
Peace,
Big Red
Sure, thanks.
Thanks man!
This contest is gonna be sick! Check out the Hype thread here:
Absolutely. Lets make it a good one
Good stuff
You've got a sick flow and tell a story well. I think the recording that comes in kinda gets in the way of the story for me, it's a bit too long and verbose. Also, the ending is vague, I'm not totally sure what happened. Regardless, a very solid and well produced track. You've got talent.
its basically a downwards progression of schizophrenia in a kid who mentally crumbled under his depression..idk it jus came to me..hella weird but all ur tracks r dope as fuck..if i can clean up my flo a bit id like to collab, lemme kno ~1~
Noice
For some reason I kept hearing a horse trot. This sounds really good man. You never cease to amaze :)
thanks a lot man, cant wait for your hip-hop competition.
Tight flow once again
You've got good flow, rythm, delivery, and a lot of snappy lines in this one. I feel like you've found a good sound and are putting thought into what you write, which is wicked. So, good job on another track!
Now some critical thoughts. The lines stand alone very well, but I couldn't tie it all together and get what you're trying to say overall. I think the song would stand stronger if you gave it some structure. That doesn't mean add a chorus or anything else specific, just be aware of where it starts, where it ends, and how it gets there. As well, some distinct dynamics would be nice: highs and lows in energy, changes in the pace of the flow, etc.
Yup. As always with my criticism, take it and use it or call me a fool, either is cool with me, haha. Keep dropping these, it's always a pleasure to listen.
I dig what you're sayin. This was pretty much just an artist summary track, kinda going back to my roots, hence the lack of structure. Check out the track I just posted, "Happy Goes Lucky" if you're lookin for MASSIVE amounts of concise 'beginning, middle, end' format lol.
Thanks for the insightful review, tingtonger. Stay tuned!
Werd
Good shit man, here's to another 200!
thanks bro.