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[FF | Laura]

Yay

It sounds good at 0:40 when the sample goes into the underwater feel. I feel like some sporadic solo brass samples would sound good with this beat.

freddyfinger responds:

that would sound pretty tight, if i work on this again i'll have to try that out, thanks

[7 and a Half of ROCK]

Sounds like an old green day song

I think you've put together something solid here. It sounds good, and you're definitly getting good at putting Fruity Loops compositions together. There are a few things that bugged me though:
-I can't really hear the base drum (try EQing the different drum parts seperately and also EQing your guitar).
-I don't get a general sense of the dynamics, ie the song doesn't build or fall in energy, it just kinda stays in the same relative place after the guitar comes in
-add more instruments!!

For your first forray into Fruity Loops it is definitly a solid foray, so keep on working at it! I also really dig composing some of the song in Fruity loops and then playing a real guitar over it, it's a cool way to do things. Good job senor!

thecoreman responds:

Thanks mate. I hate the Green Day comparison (that's me, sorry) but besides that you pretty much nailed it. See, the problam is, I'm running the demo version. So no save feature = no time to write/make things better. Still looking for a way to pirate my version, but whatever.

I'll look into the EQing thing, don't know how to do that yet. I'll try it though. About the energy thing - correct, but with an 8 hour time limit, it's pretty tough to write a song :P

Thanks a lot, mate.

[7000 Speaks [7000]]

Solid Verse

I'd say you've got to work on keeping the flow going and getting more comfortable with when you need to breath. For the first time I've heard you rap though it's definitly good work! Keep spittin these lines, and when you get the time keep poppin out them smooth beats!

Sirhc7000 responds:

ey thx man! Ur right, at some parts I was running out of breath and I'm impressed u noticed that. You keep doing you thing too dogg. Peace.

[[Kiss Our Asses]]

Superb!

Oh top of the line good sir, top of the line! It truly is excellent to hear another jim dandy peice of music! I applaud and congratulate you!

I think we should try to squeeze as many MC's onto this song as possible. A show of hands as to who agrees?

DJ-Delinquent responds:

*cuts off a million hands and throws them at TingTonger*

[[KOA] - Introduction]

Hell yes :D

My good sir, you are on fire. I applaud your tenacious tickling of that mic!

Gasmasq responds:

Thank you, my fine fellow.

*Bow*

[Beat 13 Freestyl]

Yeeeeeeaah

Sounds good man! If these is totally a freestyle it's really spot on flow wise, wicked work!

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

a bit of chopping with a few different freestyls. Thanx for the review

[sr Ft Omega Phantom(frstyle)]

really good flow for a freestyle

And sick beat. It's nice to see some Canadian talent, I'm just a bit east of ya in Montreal. Sounds good man!

battlecat responds:

tyty!

[FF | Maple Street Funk]

Yes, I do believe...

that I like this, yes. Yes, I do. I do like this! I want to buy a brown suit now.

freddyfinger responds:

Friar tuck gettin down. Lol. thanks.

[PJ - Warping]

Chillaxicalyo

I just want to float around in space and bob my head to this. Gotta admit though, I've been smelling my speakers and I just can't get the flowers. I think freddy has got an infestation of some kind in his computer :) Good stuff!

PoyzenJam responds:

yeah idk
i think somethings just wrong with him
thanks for the review man glad you like it :)

[GSG - EmptyStreet OilyPud]

Beautiful

I just want to loop this and write the endless verse. Really nice tune man!

GunstarGreene responds:

Thank you for the genuine review. 'the endless verse', I like that.